Elle Kennedy’s The Deal, the first book in her Off-Campus series, has been a staple in the new adult romance genre since its release. It follows Hannah Wells, a college student with a crush on a football player, and her unexpected arrangement with hockey star Garrett Graham. While the premise—fake dating to get what you want—is familiar, Kennedy’s execution sets it apart. The book is often described as a blend of sports romance and college drama, but it’s more grounded than that suggests.
In real-world usage, this is a book people pick up for a quick, emotionally engaging read. It’s common to see readers finish it in a day or two, often during travel or as a comfort read. The pacing is brisk, with alternating perspectives that keep the story moving. The key functional features here are the dual first-person narration and the gradual development of the relationship. Kennedy avoids the trap of instant love; instead, Hannah and Garrett’s connection builds through shared vulnerability and humor. The banter between them is a highlight, feeling natural rather than forced.
However, the book has limitations. The central conflict—Hannah’s past trauma—is handled with care, but at times it feels like a plot device rather than a fully explored theme. Some readers might find the resolution too tidy. Additionally, the side characters, particularly the other hockey players, can feel like stereotypes (the jock, the playboy) rather than distinct individuals. This isn’t a dealbreaker for a romance, but it does limit the depth of the world.
Comparing The Deal to other new adult romances, it sits somewhere between the lighter, comedic tone of authors like Christina Lauren and the heavier emotional weight of Colleen Hoover. Kennedy leans more into the former, but with occasional serious moments. For example, the subplot about academic pressure and athletic scholarships adds a layer of realism that many college romances lack. Yet, it doesn’t explore these themes as deeply as, say, a contemporary fiction novel might. This makes it a solid entry point for readers new to the genre but less satisfying for those seeking complex character arcs.
- Strengths: Natural dialogue, well-paced romance, and a protagonist who feels like a real college student (studying, partying, worrying about grades).
- Weaknesses: Predictable plot beats, occasional clichéd side characters, and a trauma subplot that could be more nuanced.
Who is this book for? It’s ideal for readers who want a low-stakes, entertaining romance with a sports backdrop. If you enjoy fake dating tropes and don’t mind a bit of melodrama, this will likely work for you. It’s also a good pick for fans of college-set stories who prefer character-driven plots over action. On the other hand, it’s not suited for readers looking for literary fiction or deep psychological exploration. The humor and tone are light, so if you prefer darker or more realistic romances, you might find it too saccharine. Also, those sensitive to themes of sexual assault (which is referenced but not described in detail) should approach with caution, as it’s a key part of Hannah’s backstory.
In terms of realistic expectations, The Deal delivers exactly what it promises: a fun, slightly emotional romance that doesn’t overstay its welcome. It’s not groundbreaking, but it’s competently written and has a loyal fanbase for good reason. The series as a whole varies in quality, but this first book remains the strongest. If you’re curious about new adult romance or Kennedy’s work, this is a reasonable starting point. Just don’t expect it to reinvent the genre.
